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Farstom wrote on 1/14/2014, 1:50 PM

to start, you're doing very well.
this music has nice body but little exposed, bare.
you can do more.
well done

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

tingel wrote on 1/14/2014, 2:14 PM

not Hip Hop... pay attention where you song will stay... in the right Genre it would be OK.... think you will learn... look at other here... (I don´t mean me, ´caus I make Rockmusik...) well done but black music with Jazz elements...... greetings Andi... better than the first two songs... greetings Andi