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Farstom wrote on 1/29/2014, 1:39 PM

good start but little bare.
I am curious on the following numbers

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 1/29/2014, 1:52 PM

..von der Wiege bis zur Bahre, langsam aber sicher erreicht man allmählig Fortschritte
..sei lieb gegrüßt, und mache weiter so

Beste Grüße, Nathalie

Maboe wrote on 1/30/2014, 2:40 PM

I like this piece, you're on a good way. But I miss a little bit variation and song structure.

Listen to other songs here and read comments, you can learn a lot. 

Hold on!

Mathias