Real nice music and a cool song, should have been longer. I like the slow feel to this cool and laid back....
@musicMDย I agree that it should be longer, that was my original intent. I just ran out of ideas while writing and then it seemed that it was finished so I stopped and worked on what I had.
Nice track. The first 40 seconds or so had a nice rock feel to it and at :53 it developed more into a bluesy feel and ended with the 2 guitar chords. You said you ran out of ideas and stopped. You could have maybe brought the first section back in to end it. Unless you write songs like I do sometimes. You probably don't but I will sometimes hit record and start playing and I don't write anything down....just keep playing and then I can't remember how I started the thing. I'll go back and listen to the first part and it's nothing like what I was playing at the end.
So... I liked you tune and look forward to hearing something else from you!
@TrishM I sometimes write hit record when I write too. In fact, 100 Days was written that way. I plugged in a guitar and a mic and it all came out in one take. Then I had to go back to clean up the words a little and learn the song. But this one wasn't that way. I just came up with three separate pieces and put them all together to make one "bigger" track.
You composed it the way you should.... Unlike me because i would have to go back and learn my original song and write the chords down or I couldn't play the song again. I didn't mean to infer that you write that way. I just wondered if you ever did.
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wrote on 8/11/2019, 5:39 PM
hello Veck ,i really like your song ! the instrumental is great and the stability of all is fantastique, i love it !
the style of the music is like the ambience of silent hill 2 video games