The Dress and The Floor (Beast pt 2)How to make a pessemist bonus track

HeavensSpear wrote on 3/29/2010, 4:39 AM
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Infatuation…

Anticipation…

When you walked through that door…I spilled the wine

Desire seized my heart, and greed my mind

…you wont need that dress…

Come down to the floor

Got me crawling to you…with wolfen eyes

Roused the hunger in me…with the sway in your thighs

…gonna steal every breath, with this kiss of mine

So ravenously …I want to taste your life

…take off that dress and come down here

On the floor

…we’re gonna make a mess…come down to the floor

Perhaps you should leave…

Or I’ll possess you…

Perhaps you should flee

My obsession for you

Your scent has me consumed

And I’m losing control

… I want to devour you…

And make love to your soul

Your touch is what I need…it’s to die for…

Got me writhing like a beast….down here on this floor

Impatience

Aggravation…

Can you hear my heartbeat…what an ominous sound

…there’s an animal in me…..threatening to come out

…that wants to tear off that dress and drag you to the floor

…there’s no escape

…..thirst must be slaked….

…..just…one more…taste

Perhaps you should leave…

Or I’ll possess you…

Perhaps you should flee

My obsession for you

There is no escape…

And I’m losing control

… but, I promise that you’ll stay

When I make love to your soul

Your touch is what I need…it’s to die for…

Got me writhing like a beast….down here on this floor

 

　

Written and performed by

Heaven’s Spear (Tracey E Kittrell)

 

　(still have mastering problems-working on it
 

Comments

Spartano wrote on 3/29/2010, 6:15 AM

Klasse Musik und Gesang, sehr Schön, 5* Herzlichen Gruß Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Former user wrote on 3/29/2010, 6:59 AM
The work of mastering is on your site. Take care in future of this over and over.
I hear, that you on the right way. Make it and go you own way. I`me shure, you will come to the end. Please take care of time in song too.


Visitor

Realy 4**** for you
Former user wrote on 3/29/2010, 8:14 AM
 Very good.
redisland wrote on 3/29/2010, 8:35 AM
klasse song
stimme sehr gut
gefällt uns
gruss tom,michel u. dieter

Michel-Solo-Band wrote on 3/29/2010, 11:24 AM
Very good.

I like the trips of hard too soft.
A  dismally mystic rock with a great voice.

Best regards
Tyler

papajeff wrote on 3/29/2010, 11:46 AM
Geiler Song, bekomme nicht oft Gänsehaut,aber hier, dieser Track hat mich 100%tig überzeugt. Super Stimme (schnief...so möchte ich auch singen...), Gitarren phänomenal, Mix perfekt!
Für mich einer der Besten Songs, seit ich in der Com bin!!!
Hammer, Hammer, Hammer!!!
Uneingeschränkte 5*!
siggi_s wrote on 3/29/2010, 5:47 PM
Hey,

schon das Intro Super!

Schließe mich da meinen Vorrednern voll und ganz an!

Klasse! Much more!

G Siggi!
Former user wrote on 3/31/2010, 8:52 AM
hi
very, very good Song.

mfg Conny
JustinofWichita wrote on 4/1/2010, 11:46 PM
How are you doin man?  I like this jam 5* 
Rana wrote on 4/1/2010, 11:58 PM
In my Favs straight...

Top song, I have become a hardcore fan of your signature style, I don't think there is much around the way you do your music.

The Beast rules Man..
Guitorb wrote on 4/3/2010, 7:31 AM
 I like it. I think it's a excellent mix and composition. I noticed that you use at least 3 vocal tracks(maybe more). Have you ever employed a gated delay or reverb? The way it works is the delay or reverb only kicks in when the level of the track reaches a certain threshold. With the dynamics of your voice I think it could make for some interesting new dimentions on the lead vocal track.
Pyrex wrote on 4/3/2010, 6:40 PM
A very good track, have heared it several times.
The mastering is nearly good, but I see guitorb as a very good mixer/masterer
(and a native english-speaker?) can explain it much better than me, what
you can do....

To my ears, in the beginning your voice is (only a bit) too low.
An the FX during the track a little loud.

The dark athmosphere and your voice ---> excellent

Keep on rockin`, and have a nice easter
smartsmurf wrote on 4/4/2010, 4:05 PM
Your mastering has gotten alot better...

I only hear some problems (kinda crackling noise) when the volume rises from 3:13 on...
But don't ask me how to change this. I master only by ear with my laptop plugged to my stereo... But I am sure... by looking and hearing around this comm you'll find experts for every aspect of music production...

Track's awsome... dark.. little disturbing...

Former user wrote on 4/5/2010, 1:39 AM
Good morning,
great music coherent and thoughtful of you. Very strong song with a slightly somber mood you have here arranged.
convincing and skilful piece of music from you!

thank you for your visit with me!

5 stars and greeting freddy
binobino wrote on 4/6/2010, 11:37 AM
well ... very well done ! I like !!! a beautiful creation ! greetings binobino
Former user wrote on 4/7/2010, 4:21 AM

Dark music. Very well done. congratulations

StoneFace wrote on 4/7/2010, 12:36 PM
The sound and mastering is quite ok. It all sounds very balanced. The voice can still be a little louder.
The music sounds from the structure to produce very strong. Like me as a very old rocker very, very good

For your story: today you still think - with love I've got you like to eat, when you get older, you think I would have eaten you only

I hope, the google-translator make it right

nice days
ALBIrecords wrote on 4/7/2010, 4:06 PM
das tut mir nicht leid, weil Du sehr gute musik daraus machst!
was soll ich dann hören, wenn Du glücklich bist aber ein mensch bist Du wohl!
ein wolf, fragt sich nicht, ob er glückseelig ist! er folgt seinen instinkten!

dann bin ich ein wurm, weil ich eine schleimspur hinter mir lasse? nein ich habe alles ehrlich gemeint! und sollte ich Dich verärgert haben, war es nicht meine absicht! ich wünsche Dir alles gute und das Du findest, wonach Du suchst!!!
eventuell kann Dir das jemand übersetzen?

lg, albi
SentientAudio wrote on 4/8/2010, 1:48 PM
Das ist Ihre beste Arbeit so weit mein Freund. Ich denke, dass es sehr gut gemacht ist. Ihre Vocals sind für diese Art der dunklen Melodie perfekt
Former user wrote on 4/11/2010, 10:02 AM
excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!


sometimes a little pop comes through,but very simple to fix.
usually these things happen at the end of a loop or track when it rolls over or goes on to the next section.
zoom in on the end very close where the pop happens,slightly pull the volume fader inward to the point where when you fit it back you wont even be able to tell its been pulled in.this should get rid of those pops and cracks.

this is a great track from you otherwise!!!!!!!!!!!
Kabegami wrote on 4/11/2010, 7:55 PM

I like the sinstr mood the song

Huck wrote on 5/23/2012, 5:20 AM

Hallo!

Schön Düster !!!!!

Schöne Stimme!!!!

Klasse gemacht!!!!

Gruß Huck!