Spartano, I know you have kindly heard this, I took on board your feedback (gratefully received) and made a few changes... Also working on a new piece which I will take the advice you have given me before I upload it!!
You learn very well, your music has become much better, I'm happy I can help you,
Also try your music with the melodies to accompany them on Mastering right or left of the auditory canal and expose the main melody in the middle, so you still reach a better sound quality, and your music will sound full and Wide!