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Farstom wrote on 11/19/2012, 12:29 PM

good work for start .but you kan more. you wil find it

Last changed by Farstom on 11/19/2012, 12:29 PM, changed a total of 1 times.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 11/19/2012, 3:23 PM

Hello,
very well done for the first song you must now try to get into the song structure
A break and melody change or at least chord changes would make the song better.
The end cut off.

Former user wrote on 11/20/2012, 6:12 PM

Hi Echelon4400  welcome newcomer your music good for newbies i like it   5*****

trance & ambient  waou 

Former user wrote on 11/21/2012, 7:29 AM

effervescent, track light, simple and all to listen.
I do not know your musical training and experience with magix.
but I like the idea and the work is interesting

hello frank

strarless friend

Former user wrote on 11/30/2012, 1:27 PM

Mit etwas mehr Zeit an diesem Stück zu verbringen, käme etwas besser. Hier wiederholt sich alles nur -, !!

yvette21