well, it's not perfect, but it IS is in 5/4 time and that for me was the point. the only other point of this song is the news agenda and the role certain newspapers play in depressing the hell out of their readers. i think i deserve a day off. ;-)
Hm, I did not understand every word but I think I know from what you singing. I look the messages only rarely. I do not want to know each day the misery of humans. I know it already!
Your song has a depressive melancholy and shifts me into another time. He reminds me at my childhood. A time with clear structures and the know, humans have misery.
I think you've made a little masterpiece here. You think it's not perfect? Oh no, it is!
Hello Broker,
a well played and sung song. Not really a rock song :-)).
You are creating a good atmosphere that grips the listener from the start until the end of the song.
I really like your voice and the way you use it.
I am still sad that you do not post the lyrics. For me you are a singer/songwriter so the words are as important as the music.
Maybe next time.
Friendly greetings
I agree with BlueSkyWorks. Very nice song.
And I remember the sound of your songs in the old com. Now they are sounding much better than in the good old days .
In this recording there is a little bit distortion in your voice. You can "see" and hear it in the waveform where the transients are cut.