hey you... you got a long way... that is truth... home? I don´t know.... learn what other do with MMM and hey your shirt is only what we know... an your monky face icon... but this is not enough... sorry ... change your cover to each song and listen what people say... Iám also a "hobby" musician... but I´ve listen.... ... welcome and hope to hear more of your own... Tingel
A typical rock song of the 70's. My only negative comment would be that the music mix overpowers the vocals,(music needs to be pushed back a little.....my opinion).
Overall, not a bad constructed song......keep it up.
Are these your words? Except the last lines then... I think it is a pretty good song, nice and relaxing. I think it's a pretty good mix. Keep this up!!