In The City (feat. eSoreni)

Father_of_Joy wrote on 1/20/2018, 6:00 AM

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Tags: Jazz, Pop

Another new song! A merger of jazz, rock and pop.
Enjoy it. And thanks as always for listening!

Lyrics:

I've got some money
and I'm leaving town today
I left the ring you gave me
with a little note to say

I'm sorry
that I hurt you
but you did so much worse to me
I can't forget the time you cheated
and left me all alone in the city

Ahh
in the city

I've got my bags all packed
and I'm never coming back
Don't even think you'll find me
I'm not leaving a single track

I'm sorry if it hurts you
but you were much more cruel to me
I won't forget the time you ruined
my life and left me alone in the city

Ahh In the city
Ahh In the city
In the city

Vocals & Lyrics by eSoreni

Comments

dan-t wrote on 1/20/2018, 6:33 AM

Bonjour ....

Perfect concept .... and I really like the voice of this charming young woman who has a lot of talent.

Dan

ide wrote on 1/20/2018, 9:50 AM

👍 very good

franco-galateo wrote on 1/21/2018, 7:23 AM

light and pleasant music ... excellent composition ..
quality . I greatly appreciated this your compositional work

Jinty wrote on 1/21/2018, 7:28 AM

Hello Father_of_Joy,

It's a beautiful song, beautifully done!!!!!

All the best,

Jinty...

Picnicboy wrote on 1/21/2018, 8:27 AM

Moinsen.

Na siehste... alles super. Jetz klingt das auch. Schöne Höhen und Mitten und unten rum is auch genug los.

Sehr gut gemacht.

Ich weiß ja nich ob du mit Ozone masterst, aber wenn nich, das sollteste dir zulegen.

Damit kriegste nochma ne wesentliche Verbesserung im Klang. Ma so als Tipp.

Ich master nur noch damit und der Klang hat sich bei mir um einiges verbessert dadurch.

Aber du hast auch so schon ein sehr gutes Ergebnis erzielt. Klingt echt gut jetz.

Und der Song gefällt mir immer noch sehr gut. Schönes Teil.

LG, Pic😎

TrishM wrote on 2/15/2018, 9:43 AM

This is the one I listened to and my comment is nowhere to be found. Odd.

Anyway....A high quality compostion with great instrumentation and the sound is (as always) very good. I'm loving the piano!
Trish