I Tried

marttymarty wrote on 3/20/2014, 10:56 PM
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Title: I Tried
Artists: Marty
Album: Galaxy Eyes Demo

This is one of my semi-recent (from the last year and a half) compositions where I experimented with different tastes of electronic music. Let me know what you think!

 

LYRICS:

I never thought we could fall so far. 

I never stopped to consider why.

And I never knew you could sink so low.

I guess it's true that love comes and goes. 

In life, we all must make a choice

To scream out loud or to hide your voice.

Well I choose to let you know,

And I choose to let you go.

And if you have a problem, then let me know.

 

Because I tried to change your mind.

And I tried to stand by your side.

And I tried to make you see;

Instead you walked all over me. 

Because I tried to change your mind.

And I tried to stand by your side.

And I tried to make you see;

Instead you walked all over me.

 

I fell so hard; nothing broke my fall.

The more I gave, you gave me nothing at all.

Well, love just don't work that way.

It's give it all or just take it away.

And if your heart beats, baby, it's news to me.

 

Because I tried to change your mind.

And I tried to stand by your side.

And I tried to make you see;

Instead you walked all over me.

Because I tried to change your mind.

And I tried to stand by your side.

And I tried to make you see;

Instead you walked all over me.

Comments

Former user wrote on 3/21/2014, 5:04 AM

Hi Marthy,

nice, to hear from you again.

Well, this experiment is Your experiment,but it doesn' impress me that much today. I am sorry.

The vocal are top, as always - the electronic sound pattern ( is this revolta???)  itself should be possible, but than there should be a bass which is more quite and basical . Otherwise it is to nervous. 

The song gurgles to himself ( this is a google translation, maybe not correct..).without really highlights. 

take it easy

Martin

 

 

Farstom wrote on 3/21/2014, 3:33 PM

Martin is right .
music is arm

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 4/11/2014, 4:28 AM

catchy song very light and pleasant to listen to
sound environment suited to the style of the track
music and vocals well done

franco