Farewell

smallcatine3 wrote on 5/2/2014, 6:55 AM
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Thank you guys for your share. This is my last track that I will post here most likely.

It's a Demo song that I recorded and did with a friend before. Featuring my voice singing+I wrote this song, and the music and mixing was done by that friend.

 

It's called Farewell, It was a demo , so don't blame me for some of the "not well done" vocals of mine , although I can do way more better than this demo.

ENJOY guys and thank you, hope you like it.

 

-Lyrics-

 

Will it be the last time to hear you
Will it be the last time to touch your face
I've been away for so long
Now I can't remember your voice

So many dark days I faced to gather my love
I sent you messages while you're gone
I guess you forgot my feelings to you
So here I go, here I go I am fading from you

[chorus]
Farewell to our sweet love kisses
Farewell to our happy life moments
Farewell to our loyal heart bonds
Farewell to our warm dream wishes

You never gave me a boost to build my love
Been surviving all these years hoping for a new world
I guess you forgot my emotions to you
So here I am, here I am breaking from you

[chorus x2]
Farewell to our sweet love kisses
Farewell to our happy life moments
Farewell to our loyal heart bonds
Farewell to our warm dream wishes
 

 

 

Comments

Leomax wrote on 5/2/2014, 3:41 PM

hi,

nice song

i like it

Former user wrote on 5/3/2014, 2:35 PM


this does sound good
I would make the mastering over again.
your voice and the instruments, it does not quite fit together.
the beginning is good, then, agree bass too loud compared to yours.
your voice needs to come more clearly, because this is good.
this is my opinion.
many greetings
Hartmut

JuanIsidoro wrote on 5/4/2014, 1:02 AM

lovely song 

Last changed by JuanIsidoro on 5/4/2014, 1:02 AM, changed a total of 1 times.

Hola

Me llamo Juan Isidoro. Soy de Sevilla al sur de España.Trabajo en un camion y hago musica por placer.

Espero que os guste.

Juan
My name is juan Isidoro. I’m from Seville in southern Spain.
Working a truck and do music for pleasure.I hope you like.

 

 

Former user wrote on 5/5/2014, 6:47 AM

 music, soft and elegant
sounds very light and refined
very well

franco

elisa.dallalibera wrote on 5/6/2014, 3:30 PM

this song is beautiful. even your voice... very very good.

 

bye

Elisa