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Former user wrote on 5/20/2014, 11:23 PM

Hi Swiitch.

Welcome to the "community".  People are helpful and it's a good place to get your feet planted and grow a little or a lot, depending on what you want.   

Everybody has their own ideas, likes and dislikes.  Myself, Techno and Trance, Disco, Hip-hop are not my fav, BUT I have an open mind and listen to most anything a few times at least. 

Listen to as much music as you have time for , write comments  when you listen to someone's music and if someone listens to yours (oh, like me) you can write a little "thank you" in their guestbook. if you want.  You may know all this already but I'm telling you anyway    you'll do great.  
BTW, your song was pretty good.  Good beat and I actually liked the vocals!

TRISH

Farstom wrote on 5/21/2014, 12:29 PM

nice start here .

well done

i like it

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

smartsmurf wrote on 5/21/2014, 12:31 PM

Interesting work on the vocal parts... the female at least (sorry, but I never liked "little wannabe rapper boy"...)

Dubstep... wow !!!

Have no suggestions for you... rarely listen to that genre (except Artyom)... and therefor have no idea about it...

Like it !!!

Why the sudden escape at the end ???

 

Former user wrote on 5/21/2014, 1:06 PM

Hi! Nur bis zur Mitte. Dann wirkt's zu einsam, oder gelangweilt.

LG / aces-e37

SWiiiTCH wrote on 5/21/2014, 8:40 PM

@smartsmurf I think ur right about the male vox. The ending is that way because its still a work in progress. Thanks for the advice and comments. I really want the constructive criticisms. 

Former user wrote on 5/22/2014, 4:49 AM

this is the first time I listen to your song, not knowing your musical training.
I just only to give an opinion about what I heard.
the rhythm is typically suited to dance music, the effects seem too firti the melody is minimal and accompanies the voice that seems to me to outweigh the musical.
the idea as a whole could also be good, then reviewing some steps I think that everyone can clearly improve

franco