As I remember.....

alternativ wrote on 6/13/2011, 1:06 PM
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Its a melody to a poem I made once......

 

the chairs are again

around the table

the rain is laying

like a cloth

the people

that should have

been around it

have all left

at the first sign

of autum

 

As I remember

you where

at the table

hoping

the rain would stop

but the rain

is comming

its the sign of autum

 

I am born a septemberday......

 

 

 

(The poem is translated from danish)

Comments

samp wrote on 6/13/2011, 3:00 PM

Oh - its wonderful!!

 

The lyrics... are GREAT!!

and what you made... the music... I really like it!

 

I can feel the atmosphere.... go on with it!

LG

samp

Former user wrote on 6/14/2011, 12:29 AM

super stéréo : excellente mélodie : bravo 5***

Former user wrote on 6/14/2011, 12:18 PM

Recht außergewöhnliche Mischung das -:Gut, gut!

YaraLove

dilampercutshow wrote on 6/16/2011, 8:41 AM

très poètique effectivement, ça plane bien !*****