Anxiety

alternativ wrote on 6/23/2011, 9:40 AM
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The voice is still in one channel, but my soundchard is out of order....

 

 

I know

you are not afraid

I know

you dont feel fier

what ever it is you are feeling

when you ask

"why so angry"

I dont understand

I raise

my hand against you

you watching sadly

and dont resist

all I can see

is a tear

down youre cheek

why - sweet thing

dont you hit back

all I can do

is whipe youre tear away again

it is so simpel

I am not just furious inside

the sadnes

you tear gives me

has to be hidden

beaten away!

we smile to eachother

"of course - we`ll meet again"

but how how the hell

am I supose to understand it?

the longing

close to pain

when you walk away

the sadness

when you show up again!

Comments

papajeff wrote on 6/23/2011, 11:40 AM

Yeah is a good wavy track, sounds good but your voice is override, you just need a new soundcard i think....tell me more about the making of at this song. The end is f...bad, what´s happen?

LG Jeff

samp wrote on 6/23/2011, 12:15 PM

Very good lyrics... I really like them!... And the sound.... a little ruffled....
never mind the voice... you will change the sound card and everything will be ok...
GO ON... very good!!!!

LG

samp
5*

Former user wrote on 6/23/2011, 1:57 PM

Recht außergewöhnlich das auch -:Soweit, so gut!

YaraLove

blacki-S wrote on 6/23/2011, 2:21 PM

CooL gemacht!

Volle 5*

LG blacki

Rana wrote on 6/23/2011, 2:23 PM

My sincere recommendation would be to re-look at the whole track to do proper justice to your creativity. Outro leaves a very poor impression on the whole effort and on spoken text, you need to have a limiter as a must to maintain a reasonable sound level without clipping.

Try Creative X-Fi external soundcards, extremely good value for money against the capabilities.