Procyon and Renegat, is this an improvement? Thanx for your previous input...
although the idea of composition is not too bad, the song seems too confusing, but this is just my opinion.
the set contains instrumental tonal variations too sharp and continuous
I think that a revised optical easier, this could greatly improve your work
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Well done courage2b. You have a great ear for composition. Many people who attempt this kind of arrangement simply do not.
By the way, if you have not already done so, make sure your your "Settings" is configured to receive "Guestbook" and "Private" messages. That way you can send people individual messages as opposed to responding to them on the page that you posted your music. It took me weeks to figure that one out when I first signed on here.
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Thanx, Griff, for the compliment and the info on settings. This is not the easiest site to navigate!
Sorry....I didn't see this until now. Did you post it in a different category?
It sounds a little better, but it's hard to say without the original posting to compare it to.
I like the composition and most of it sounds great, but I was hoping for more separation with the guitars. The main instruments are still stacked on top of each other in the center of the soundstage. The bass and drums are fine just as they are. Panning the guitars out more to the left and right would really open up the sound.
Don't worry...this is your first piece. I had a friend who led a cover band that toured the country for ten years. When he played a couple of his own compositions for me, they sounded good but rather dull. When I figured out what the problem was, I had him pan the instruments out, and WOW...it made all the difference in the world. Even he was surprised how much better it sounded.