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Farstom wrote on 1/26/2014, 12:12 PM

too long.
but your best to date.

only sound is not good.
you have to adjust it better.

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 1/26/2014, 2:20 PM

instrumentally the compositional idea seems good, the rhythm is too strong for me.
This makes the song aggressive, while it was better that it was not.
I advise you to review the drum parts and you'll see that the song will be much more beautiful
but it is clear it is just a suggestion
otherwise fine

franco

Renegat13 wrote on 1/26/2014, 4:56 PM

 bad song and bad mix, sorry i have not like

Former user wrote on 1/27/2014, 12:35 AM

Clipping !!! No Dynamic at all !!!

Former user wrote on 1/31/2014, 1:28 PM

..in aller Liebe, alles gut und schön(..), ja das ist es
..nach etwas mehr Überraschungen, habe ich aber noch suchen müssen

Beste Grüße, Nathalie

caring wrote on 1/31/2014, 3:33 PM

I also put dub instruments in it  In united state we like to line dance it is for line dancing that is why it has a strong beat to it we like it like that when we line dance  everybody here love it we dance to it   like I said I like variety in my music I just have to learn genres and I will able to call it right  you can only judge what I tell you  If I do not call it right  you judge just what I say