Don't know why, but when it started my first reaction to the drum beat was 'Hey Mickey'.  Now that says fun immediately.  I know it's different but it's got that same energy.  Great stuff Alan.  I'm making a note though - you actually admitted to almost liking something you did!!!!!!!  Hang on I need to sit down.

If you want some dumb suggestions I'm sure I can up with a few.

Hi Alan:

There you go again, dude!  I wish you would cease and desist from trashing your stuff, man.  Obviously, you thought enough of this track to send it out, so let's get on the ball.  

My take?  I enjoyed this song.  And, you want to know something?  It's not nearly as atrocious as you think.  So there! <lol>

Griff

-choice loops magix very accurate
all very nice, and the result looks good to me
opinion without doubt positive

franco

Assembled well. Sounds good so far. The sound of the drums

reminds me a little bit of the old yamaha drum machines.

a good track, like it +++

LG Sigrid

Hi!

Interesting...I personally don't like the Hi-Hat which comes on my headphones' left side...sometimes you use it too often...

But nevertheless it is a good song...Mix of Synthies and Rock-Elements...Liked it...The drum is great and powerful!

I miss a melody which brings life into the song...and I'm no real friend of Samples...Towards the end it seems that the song stucks and a small part is repeated like the record is defective...

The end is strange...this guitar plays too often the same notes...not a nice ending...I would have put a delay on the end and let it fade out...

All the best!
Mond

Hi Alan

"Hey Mickey", Yep, as Nick said, that is the drum intro.  I'm glad I read the comments first or it would be bugging me all day what the intro sounded like.  (Thanks Nick!) I think you have a couple of melodies going....The main one with the solo guitar and another with the panned, higher pitched guitars. At 1:22, the hi hat was a bit over done with the triple hit at the end of each measure but you saved it just in time with the entrance of the guitar melody.

I think it's pretty good, Alan

Trish

Yo no entiendo de estilos en profundidad,no entiendo de tecnicismos ortodoxos,,,Yo entiendo de sonido,ondas sonoras...El sonido es claro siempre en mis oidos,me da igual el estilo,me gusta o no me gusta..En este caso el sonido me gusta,aunque realmente mi sonido es el Hard Rock , tambien aprecio cosas diferentes,,,

No esta mal este Pop tan odiado...

Can hear you have had fun and can agree with you on the points of the dear Simon. 

All said about pop, I think you have made some passeges that have real power and could be used to a yet a gould nugget. Really love the lead in 0:55. Some good mixes.

Happy.

Hello Alan ,

Beautiful music Rock !   5*

Best regards Tony

Lavoro molto buono co un buon ritmo e ottimo mixaggio, saluti da tgfmusica, Gianfranco, ciao

Musica  molto lontana dai miei standard ma comunque coinvolgente e ben ritmata.
Mi piace.

очень интересно и мне очень понравилось 10* вот так

nice.

Good arrangement !!! I like it !! Perfect base for a song !!

5 *****

Hi Comsy i I liked it to ,nice drumming but,i whould use dubbel basskick 

but dont men to rude  the song over all is good

have a grate day Peace to u 2

Hi Al,

Don't keep underestimating yourself, give yourself some credit. This track is OK.  Sure, I've heard better from you, but this effort sails along quite nicely.  It has rythym and nice guitar work.  Also, it is nicely balanced.

4*

Good on 'ya mate,

Gryami.

Ok Alan,

I'm going to speak from the heart here.

I'm on the bandwagon too here.  This song is actually pretty good.  If you are doing things for fun, you should be enjoying what you are doing.  This song is really good.  You apparently felt good enough with what you have done with this to share it with us.  It's easier to give credit than to take or receive it...I know, but you are good at what you do.  Accept that and believe it.  There is no "Putting Yourself Down" in my circle.    If you don't feel like it's good enough and flawed, wait until you fix it, post it, and be proud of it and promote it.  I love your work as do many others in this community.  From one musician to another...have fun and enjoy the process!!!

BC