P.S. HipHop/RAP are you not in the wrong department (more or less by accident I am now buzzy in the HIP HOP field otherwise I would probably not have heard this)
P.S.2 As in the track before (Hurt) I still think you are playing with words without saying much, (I appreciate the attemp and keep on trying it is the right direction) but as said before I love your voice and the melody.