Her face has a very strong expression... and this could be a very good portrait if the cut wasn't so bad...
In original size there are some strange "quality" features which I don't really like about this picture (is this the original picture or some kind of "montage"? )
"Portrait of Immigrant Girl in NY"... doesn't she have a name?
My comment may sound a bit harsh... but "Hey !!!"... it's only about your picture and has nothing to do with you...