There must be someone who has just played with electric guitar and a little rhythm ... think it is your little Polly who has inspired you .... It sounds sensible and excellent, but maybe it would have been even nicer if at some point there was also a string that follows the harmony ... it's your choice tump up

Thank you so much Finn. As much as I like the piece, I did have reservations that something was off. My fears were being realized with the absence of comments I feel inclined to remove my post and give my Polly a better song. Good Health to you my friend, CHRIS

Moin,

"Started with a mellow 2 min. guitar jingle and lost control....."

That's why I make music! Immersion in the grandiose "timelessness".

Very nice work.

Greetings - Mark 😀😀😀

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Das ist mein Grund, weshalb ich Musik mache! Das Eintauchen in die grandiose "Zeitlosigkeit".

Sehr schönes Werk.

Moin,

"Started with a mellow 2 min. guitar jingle and lost control....."

That's why I make music! Immersion in the grandiose "timelessness".

Very nice work.

Greetings - Mark 😀😀😀

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Das ist mein Grund, weshalb ich Musik mache! Das Eintauchen in die grandiose "Zeitlosigkeit".

Sehr schönes Werk.

"Immersion in the grandiose timelessness" How truly profound. Time stops in creativeness, getting lost in a composition, in music more than anything You quoted me, I quoted you, the mystique of music. I wish I knew more about it. yet I am capable of composing even at my level.

Thank you so much for your comment Mark, it helped me . Best Regards CHRIS

Very well done. Very nice. But it sounds a little bit dull...

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