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Farstom Posté à 23/10/2013 19:23

nice start

nice work

i like it

Dernière modification de Farstom le 23/10/2013, 19:23, Modifié 1 fois au total.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

carraway2105 Posté à 25/10/2013 00:48

I enjoyed the chord progression very simple but effective with your production, strings and acostic open guitar pattern.  I would have preferred a deeper kick in the bass line, preference for this style is to closely red line the bass. More sound in opening, the production gives away the intent of the song...let the listener wait for the vocals. Less..chorus..less is more in this case..the music give the listerer the mood...nice sounds...Oh...and make it a female...the timbre change would sound wonderful....