very sudden beginning... really no intro to the track.
quite interesting theme... but the sound (mix / mastering) should be much better, so we could aprecciate this beautiful music...
how do you produce your music... what are your intensions. there's no info in your profil at all...
also... by listening and commenting on others too... you can learn so much. this community is not a "one-way-road" (even though many here think this way...)
I agree with you smartsmurf, Indeed the beginning is not suitable, Plus, there should have been a difference between the sound objects volumes, so they don't sound all at once and all loud and kinda un-organized.