'Za

SpriteBat wrote on 7/23/2011, 4:52 AM
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All original, composed with synth and beatbox. All lyrics and vocals by me, except for the audio clip near the end.

This song was almost finished for a long time, but then I forgot about it for a while. Today I finally recorded the last vocal parts (soft humming in the background) and also added the audio clip. It is from a TV show called "Even Stevens". Here is the video:  It was so funny that I just had to put it in a song, and it fit pretty well here.

As you might have realized, this song is about my love of pizza ('za is short for pizza). It is a song about the perfect pizza.

The picture is from google, but I added the words (lyrics) at the top.

Thanks for listening!

Comments

Spartano wrote on 7/23/2011, 8:26 AM

Hallo mein Junger Freund Travis, Wieder eine wundervolle Eigene Musikalische Komposition,

leider Versteht man nicht was du Singst, die Stimme müsstest du mehr Hervorheben,

Wünsche dir noch ein Herzliches Wochenende, dein Musikfreund Joachim!

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Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Former user wrote on 7/23/2011, 11:15 AM

The voice is not audible enough, and end, a little sloppy. Yet it is a good musical subject ....

Jokerface wrote on 7/24/2011, 1:46 AM

Hi Travis,

Ein sehr lustger Song, der gute Laune macht. Gefällt mir sehr gut.

L.G.

Jens

datamix wrote on 7/24/2011, 8:06 AM

Hi Travis, I think you should work more in the voice, sometimes too low, the musical structure is very good and worth it.
Best wishes
datamix

samp wrote on 7/24/2011, 8:54 AM

Hey - your voice sounds interesting... but definitely too low... more of it!!!

And I really got a watery mouth.... of this ´za!!!!

Funny work...love it! Very nice melody!

LG samp

For a lot of things 5*.... let us hear the new version too.... AND such a nice picture
again!!!!!

SpriteBat wrote on 7/25/2011, 5:08 AM

Thanks to everyone for the advice. I have the vocals at a low volume because I have always considered the music more important. When I listened to this with the vocals louder, they overpowered the instruments, which can be difficult to hear all at once.

Besides, my lyrics are really stupid.

TommyG wrote on 7/25/2011, 2:38 PM

Beautiful.

Rana wrote on 7/30/2011, 8:09 AM

Time to define a new genre "Pepperoni"  which is one of my favourites in Pizzas...

Beautiful track Travis, I am imagining having my slice while listening to this beautiful piece.

I guess there was a problem with Magix media forwarding option when you released the track. My regrets for being late.