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Former user wrote on 12/5/2012, 12:45 PM

Hier ist aber vieles ziemlich durcheinander. Da kann ich dir aber nicht zustimmen -, !!

yvette21

Farstom wrote on 12/5/2012, 6:14 PM

very beautiful. this is the best that you have made .  try more

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 12/5/2012, 10:14 PM

Thank you Farstom I will keep trying

Former user wrote on 12/8/2012, 12:22 AM

sehr mutig selbst zu singen....dafür schon mal mein Respekt....musikalisch wie schon unter mir angedeutet etwas durcheinander wirkend.....etwas mehr Strucktur....das A und O in Sachen Musik ......!!!!!

Das Aaaaaahhhhh sehr schräg und hab hier nicht das Gefühl,das Du hier einem klaren Weg verfolgst.....

das Gekreische würde ich mir an Deiner Stelle tunlichst verkneifen....ist echt was übel......

aber gut....wir sind alle mal angefangen und versuche mal in Zukunft mehr Harmonie in Deinen Musikstücken einzubringen........

Herzlichst

nafets

 

Former user wrote on 12/8/2012, 3:59 PM

nafets02    Life is so beautiful

Former user wrote on 12/8/2012, 4:04 PM

yvette21 I dont understand what you are saying It sound just a lot words thrown together   Is it because of the language barrier?

Former user wrote on 12/8/2012, 4:07 PM

yvette21 It sounds like a lot of words just thrown together

oddjobs wrote on 12/15/2012, 4:44 PM

not bad, great vocal

maybe next time try a eal rap

thumbsup!!! 

Former user wrote on 12/15/2012, 11:54 PM

Hi - very good work music - Just keep moving and maybe it will go well - i like it -   5*****