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NorbertSN wrote on 5/3/2016, 12:01 PM

Hmm....it sounds like a great chorus section for a track.

Way too short for a whole track, of course.

But I like the ideas that are contained, but the finish line comes way too early!

waalfred wrote on 5/3/2016, 3:27 PM

Finished form ?  I think too short - the song need more ideas

waalfred

Former user wrote on 5/4/2016, 1:57 AM

this not my music prefer, but apprecciate your idea compositional

fine

franco

beabea wrote on 5/6/2016, 2:23 PM

...schöner ansatz...

jecke wrote on 5/10/2016, 4:03 PM

It remind me a little of Rammstein but I think it repeat it self a little to much,  I could see this as a powerful chorus and it would work great with a bit softer verse.