I like the play of the percussions. Maybe it is missing an exciting bkgrnd noise or a athmospheric pad.
Good guitar line but unfortunately without support by a bass.

Exciting work ..... at this length of the song he should sound a bit more varied.

En liebe gruess vom

sandro

Hi Sandro

Thank you as always for your comments, this music making business is much more complicated than it first appears.

I normally include too many layers to my music, so on this occasion I tried to strip it down to the bare essence, to a raw state of emotions. Nothing fancy, just bluey soulful feel.

However I will take your comments on board and try a remix with the addition of bass and pad sounds and see how it works out for me.

I have a questions, is there a video from an expert music software composer who shows the basic steps to go through to create the structure on which the rest hangs. I feel I am creating music in total darkness.

I also find it very difficult indeed to create a composition around my own original songs.

Maybe I am expecting to much of myself.

Thanks again for your comments - appreciated.

Indigo
 

typically tribal rhythm, a set of well-assorted percussion that sounds good.
the song immediately transports you in africa

melody very good

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