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JonUsa wrote on 6/1/2012, 2:14 PM
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I like a sincere input...

I purchased this software and the soundpools, for my video  comment background music.. I was keep getting copyright notices I figure I will put together few notes drums and bass take care of that problem..

I love music yet I know nothing about music theory or structure.. Rhythm, Notes, Scales, Chords , Verses, Chorus or bridges etc..

This is my very first piece of music done totaly with music maker 18.. Ending needs more work I know that...

So what is wrong with this 1 minute long music.. ?  Where are the mistakes... Scale of 1 to 10 how do you rate it?

Please do comment....

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Former user wrote on 6/1/2012, 5:57 PM

Hi 

Ich dachte gerade ich hätte nicht richtig gesehen...1,20 min ist zu kurz um es "Song" zu nennen. Demo tifft es wohl eher.

Hört sich gut an, aber mach ihn erst mal fertig.

Liebe Grüße, Daniel

JonUsa wrote on 6/1/2012, 9:50 PM

Thank you Daniel, taken time and commenting..

From Google translation of what you posted this is what I got:

" I just thought I had not really seen ... 1.20 min is too short to call it to "track". Demo is probably Tifft.
Sounds good, but it finished'm doing.
Best regards, Daniel"

Yes it is short because I dont need long music for backgrounds... It's not demo songs from soundpools if thats what you mean.... I am glad to hear you think it sounds good... it's a inspiration for me.

 

 

 

Spartano wrote on 6/2/2012, 1:49 AM

Klasse Musik, Sehr schade, viel zu Kurz, Herzlichen Gruß Spartano

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Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Huck wrote on 6/2/2012, 7:06 AM

Hallo!

Bin ich auf die fertige Version gespannt!

Gruß Huck!

Former user wrote on 6/2/2012, 2:19 PM

Ich muss das mit etwas Distanz betrachten. Daraus kannst du sicher mehr machen. Könnte sich lohnen.

BEHAPPY!

BEHAPPY

Former user wrote on 6/3/2012, 2:13 AM

Hola...

Me Gusta...El Final No Tanto

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