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Farstom wrote on 4/18/2013, 1:27 PM

well done but

it needs some glue between independent sounds.
it is not smooth

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 4/19/2013, 12:43 PM

Hier übertönt so manches: Etwas mehr mit den Pegeln arbeiten wäre ganz nett. Damit man den Ausgleich klarstellt -, !!

yvette21

Former user wrote on 4/20/2013, 12:47 PM

ripeto il mio parere io considero questo tuo lavoro , un insieme sonoro molto particolare.
considerò questo tua traccia un lavoro di ricerca sonora.
ma ti consiglio di ampliare anche la melodia e di non esagerare con la sovrapposizione dei suoni

franco

Former user wrote on 4/20/2013, 3:05 PM

Hola Amigo...

Buen Trabajo...

5 *...

Saludos...