Hey that's really good. I would have to move to the rocking part being revised ... but I like the idea ... very good and greetings, sorry I'm not online as often ... Andi
Some cool ideas here. Lots of changes then going back to the primary tune, The "verse" part that emphasizes the keyboard and atmosphere is really cool. I think more focus on the song, tighten it up. keep the production and instruments consistent so it sounds more complete rather than an experimental demo. Although very good still.