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Nickillus wrote on 2/25/2015, 7:03 AM

If it weren't for how much my scrawny legs frighten the cat, this almost makes me want to run off and change my trousers for a bightly coloured pair of shorts.  Sonic summer.  The lyrical repetition doesn't bother me at all.

Former user wrote on 2/25/2015, 4:23 PM

Hi Tetley

Hey mon!  I am a fan of Bob  Marley, Peter Tosh, Jimmy Cliff....and I love raggae music, especially in the summertime, sitting outside with a cold beverage and the hot sun.  Absolutely my favorite time!  So your song warms my soul and makes me hungry for the warm weather and everything that goes along with it (except mowing the grass!).

As Nickillus said..."The lyrical repetiton doesn't bother me at all" either.

Trish

 

bikergsx wrote on 2/26/2015, 7:41 AM

Great deep base..., shook my furniture and even rattled my teeth...   Well done.

Former user wrote on 2/26/2015, 11:46 AM

Hi Tetley:

Okay, okay...  I definitely 'feel' the rhythm and the beat.  Hopefull, I'lll be feeling the "sunshine" here in the Apple soon.  Love that bass clef piano! 

Now, everybody get up and move dem big foots, mon!

Griff

Farstom wrote on 2/26/2015, 12:07 PM

very well done

nice work

i like it

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

stuallan wrote on 3/13/2015, 11:15 AM

Hi Tetley,

Definitely hearl the rhythym, looking forward to feeling the heat up here! Loved the reggae vibe you created. Repetitious vocals no problem Mon as you said, goes with the beat.

Tasty guitars licks throughout!

 

Great job!

Best Regards,

Stu