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doublea500 wrote on 1/18/2014, 10:22 PM
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preparing for the fight coming in strong, you fall and think it is all over. you rise back up and realize it is meant to be you, that you can do anything. you stand strong and attack the evil. it gives you one big fight to the end and the final blow comes from within you to strike down the beast and live on to write bigger and better music.

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stuallan wrote on 1/19/2014, 9:55 PM

Hey doublea500,

Sweet! Listened to Up First first, maybe you checked some other stuff on the com before you created this however, I liked this one a lot. Again, the end needs some work but everything in between was SUPER.

Constructive criticism only, you have some great licks. In my opinion, just a little polish is needed . As stated previously, listen to other work out there and build from that. Express yourself in your music and your song covers. Suggest looking for other pictures to identify each song and make them your own.

Looking forward to more from you.

 

Cheers,

stuallan

Farstom wrote on 1/20/2014, 1:43 PM

Stuallan is right .

well done

good start

i like it

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom