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Farstom wrote on 8/26/2013, 12:03 PM

nice start.
but it remains to be done.
no line. . everything in it .
at 2:28 no nice transition. and maybe ....

but everyone has it to start.
no problem. we are all here to learn from each other.
it comes good

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Former user wrote on 8/26/2013, 1:20 PM

Hi Chizzy:

The catch beat (drums/bass) is very nice.  However, I would have hoped you would have introduced some kind of melodic phrase a little earlier in the piece; as you finally did at around 2:28-30.  Overall, it has a very good rhythmic flavor to it.  A sure head-rocker.  I gave it a four because it needs a little more melodic meat on its rhythmic bones.

Not a bad first attempt though.

Griff

siggi_s wrote on 8/26/2013, 4:00 PM

Hey,

Farstom Komm. That i think

LG Siggi

( Welcome here!)

Former user wrote on 8/27/2013, 12:39 PM

Die Trommeln sind sehr präsent –sie nehmen hier viel mehr in Anspruch, als die alle andern Instrumente –ich denke aber, dass der Name allein schon vieles verrät, wie es hier vor sich geht –ist also zu erwarten –, !!

yvette21