very experimental sound ...... why not! Actually quite ok .... mainly consists of bass, drum and vocals. However, compiled Certainly fits .... it sounds a bit empty.
But attempts to put a pad in the Bkgrnd that fills the empty set something out.
A change in the "melody" would not be bad, so you can extend the song a bit. So he is a bit short and still sounds a bit unfinished.

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