It sounds wild. . In its origin I would guess, it`s a folk tune? Sounds a bit like. Now the song got rocky character.
The only I suggest to improve is the drumtrack. It needs more variance, breaks, Fill ins, Stopps and so on. A real drummer would never repeat one pattern for the whole song.
for me it still sound a bit like a banjo - just this country-stile - something to bawl to when you had a few more beers :-) in my world THIS should be a HIT!!!! just GREAT!!!