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marttymarty wrote on 2/5/2014, 10:42 PM
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This is another oldie. I wrote this back in 2007 when I first really started writing music and produced it later in 2008 using Magix Music Maker 2007. Please excuse the crappy microphone I used. Tell me what you think!

 

LYRICS:

I remember when you looked me in the eyes and said

Everything was alright that night - that night I cried out,

"I want to just escape. I just want to run away and never come back home."

 

Please forget those days I could feel nothing but my pain.

The pain of living a broken life and

Living this desperate lie.

I want to just escape. I want to run away and never come back home.

Let's never come back home.

I want to just escape. I want to run away and never come back home.

Let's never come back home.

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Former user wrote on 2/6/2014, 3:10 AM

we do not think there are problems with the microphone.
the song is interesting both instrumental and vocal.
very sweet and sometimes sad this song is very expressive.
as we are concerned, the opinion is without doubt a very positive

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baux.erick wrote on 2/6/2014, 9:03 AM

Bonjour,

Trés jolie composition.

 

Erick

stuallan wrote on 2/6/2014, 11:09 AM

Very plaintiff emotional song.

Well done.

Cheers,

stuallan

Farstom wrote on 2/6/2014, 11:27 AM

not bad

i like it

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

papajeff wrote on 3/23/2014, 10:33 PM

Hi Marty, oh what a song! I can hear your fine melancholy in it. It´s a very sad song, also the instruments fit very well and give the feeling resist.

I think this song is great and i would like to help you to rework it for a perfect production....although I have not much time. If you´re also interested in a post production you can contact me with a message in my account.

When we want to do it, you must send all your single tracks without any presets and effects in wave files. I load it to my DAW (Samplitude proX) and then it´s goin on........you will hear in in fantastic sound.

Best regards, Jeff