Thank you everyone for your constructive criticism on my first try at composing. I´ve tried to incorporate some of your suggestions like adding some drums, bass etc. I hope you like this version:-)
Yesss...what an improvement. A little masterpiece. What is so great about this piece is its consistence and your ability to stick to one single idea and not try to squeeze as many ideas as possible into the song.
the track is good...
kann der nachfölgende rezischreiber übersetzten das zu dem track noch ne stimme fehlt wäre echt nett da mein englisch ziemlich eingerostet ist
Former user
wrote on 1/7/2009, 4:01 PM
Hi ....
Yesssss! What my friend St Paul, writing is just, and this is my feeling. Now, is missing, nice words, on nice music ....
I liked the additions....the second drum track fit well. Listening through it again, I really liked from 3:30 or so on, so maybe in this case, less can be more . When I first started tracking, I would use way too many samples(I will post one of these sometime...), then I went the other direction....finding a happy medium is key. You had a solid idea for this song, which is more than I do most of the time. Keep posting!
Well, it`s definitely better now... still, the song should have some vocals... and you look like you have a nice voice... so, why don`t you give it a try...???
what: the ting-a-ling > me does disturb the herds of cows sound with us on the Alpine pasture so?
was mich stört:das Gebimmel>so klingen bei uns auf der Alm die Kuhherden
Former user
wrote on 1/8/2009, 11:08 AM
I like this song same as before. I only would the syth.of bells make a little bit softer!!!
Welcome Elisabeth
this is a very nice song, i can't write exactly what i feel,
he goes deep inside me, when i hear it i'm flying in to the sky.
for me an absolut exellent sound!!!! this is the truth!!!!
best regards
Carlo
I like all 3 songs, every one has a great touch, I can see where you are going with these, lovely arppegio, Melody and drum lines. I look forward to hearing more...
Best Wishers
David
Former user
wrote on 1/21/2015, 1:26 AM
Great track with a wonderful, positive mood. Very fine arpeggios and 100% suitable synth bass. Did you do it with VStI-Instruments or with Magix-Soundpool-Samples?