Evolution

hounddoggy56 wrote on 3/23/2014, 12:57 PM
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The Music Within the Music.

This is a rework of the instrumental from my more intense piece and first vocal attempt "EVERYBODY"

Vocals removed, harsher tones deleted, and then it took on a life of it's own and evolved into this which sounds nothing like the original instrumental in most ways.

In Some ways a obscure statement on the evolution of music itself,

The piece is not only an evolution of the original work, but as it moves along it evolves within itself and morphs at different ways, sometimes subtly and at others dramatically.

From the "Tao of Tater": -

       " If your puppy paws aren't a-prancing while you listen,

          Please check your pulse  cause you are probably deceased and dont know it......"

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Former user wrote on 3/24/2014, 1:23 PM

Hi hounddoggy:

I don't know whether or not I ever listened to the original version.  But, this version has "smack".  A term you may not be familiar.  It means "punch" or "groove".  I suspect that you do not want to categorize this music, because (frankly), it could be a fit in a few categories.

Nonetheless, the sound certainly holds the listener's attention.

Keep experimenting my friend.  Only good things will emerge.

Griff

Farstom wrote on 3/24/2014, 2:19 PM

COOL

well done

i like it

but honestly.
nice that you have vocal removed.
but previous version is quieter., and sound is better adapted.

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

hounddoggy56 wrote on 3/24/2014, 3:05 PM

I have uploaded the instrumental version of Everybody for comparison purposes only.

I am not sure what Farstom means by "previous version is quieter., and sound is better adapted."

The vocal track in Everybody is actually curing a mess of evil within the instrumental track

as you will hear when you listen to it.

I now consider the instrumental track to Everybody to be an embarrassment.

Evolution is actually calmer and quieter in most regards to Everybody and quite a departure from the original Everybody instrumental.

I consider this a learning experience with the intention to rewrite the instrumental track for Everybody based on lessons learned with Evolution. Hopefully "Everybody Version 2" will be a vastly improved work.

Farstom wrote on 3/24/2014, 3:45 PM

when I listen to 1:11 and 1:12 of both transitions.
I can hear the difference.
maybe I say fuit., but it's what I hear.

Last changed by Farstom on 3/24/2014, 3:45 PM, changed a total of 1 times.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom