Ever Present

Enshala wrote on 7/13/2013, 10:58 AM

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This is my first shot at making a song with Magix. I am only using the clips from the soundpools that came with the program. I decided to make an album called "Mystic Warfare", and this will be the first song. The song is entitiled "Ever Present". I made the album cover in Photoshop using a screenshot from Guild Wars 2 as a background.

I think there are a couple of places where the clips are not quite in harmony, but I am learning. Any comments are welcome.

I look forward to getting to know people in this forum.

Cheers,

Enshala

Comments

JuanIsidoro wrote on 7/13/2013, 11:25 AM

Welcome to the community magix
I think that this first work you are very well done....
. My valuation: is very good

juan

Former user wrote on 7/13/2013, 1:17 PM

Gratulation zu deinem Durchstarter –mehr davon wäre auch ganz nett -, !!

yvette21

P.S.: Ich lebe hier, und rede so, weil ich hier zu Hause bin –anderes kommt mir auch nicht in den Sinn –ich möchte meinen Kopf nicht darüber zerbrechen, anderes sprachlich zum Ausdruck zu bringen… .

Enshala wrote on 7/13/2013, 1:39 PM

Yvette, danke für die Ermutigung! Ich bin schon an einen anderen Song zu erstellen.

Herzliche Grüße, Enshala

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Juan, thank you too for the encouragment! One day I will try some guitar... you are an inspiration!

Take care, Enshala

AtomicFusion wrote on 7/13/2013, 2:25 PM

Hi Enshala,

....herzlich willkommen in der comm. und toller Einstieg in in die Ma Mu Ma Welten !

weiter so

gefällt mir gut

greetings,

Jojo

ArtistW wrote on 7/13/2013, 7:58 PM

I think the cover as such is excellent (maybe the association it gives is a little to much in the Gothic direction but that's oke) and the music is good, keep on going this way you have the wright feeling for it.

Tip: be careful with the use of voice samples (generally speaking I don't like them)

gunbjo wrote on 7/15/2013, 9:27 AM

Hallo Enshala,

A really good start and you seem to know something about mixing and mastering. I like your melody too.

Greetings

Gunbjo

Alighiero-Tozzi wrote on 7/16/2013, 8:58 AM

Ciao, qualche attenzione maggiore in fase di mastering per equilibrare i suoni alti e medi che sono poco presenti.

La composizione va bene ed anche la copertina ma ti prego usa poco ( o meglio per niente) i vocals samples: sono sempre gli stessi ed un artista si nota per la creazione almeno della melodia. Prova a scrivere un testo e a cantare con la tua voce oppure prova ad eseguire una tua melodia con uno strumento musicale vero.

Benvenuta in Magix