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Farstom wrote on 1/20/2014, 1:49 PM

no sorry

no line
no harmony
only individual sounds

you can do more.
listen to music fo other members.
We learn from each other here.

Last changed by Farstom on 1/20/2014, 1:49 PM, changed a total of 1 times.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

doublea500 wrote on 1/20/2014, 2:45 PM

I can tell you do not like it. for me it is different and thats why I like it, but thaks for the comment.

smartsmurf wrote on 1/21/2014, 1:42 AM

I can only repeat "Farstom"...

you can do more.
listen to music fo other members.
We learn from each other here.

Just don't rush, take your time with uploads... and see critical comments as what they are...

...words to help you to get better.

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Way too many turns on that short piece of music... lacks "some" structure and concept.