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Farstom wrote on 9/7/2013, 1:34 PM

good start
but little bare. .
but it does not matter. we are all here to learn from each other.

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

mrisley07252011 wrote on 9/7/2013, 2:21 PM

Thanks for the feedback... I have posted up another one if you want to hear it.

ArtistW wrote on 9/8/2013, 7:27 PM

It is a bit too basic (as such not bad) if you had used for instace strings or keys then and it would have been a lot better.

 

PS. I assume that you have grasped the principle that nr 1 of the base fits (not out of tune) to the no 1 of strings and so on