BOOM BOOM

Padgett wrote on 8/3/2011, 12:50 PM
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Title: BOOM BOOM
Artists: Lori Anne Padgett-Jennerjohn
Album: Lori Jennerjohn

It's plain to see
that in reality
you put the blame on me
when you feel'n guilty

you poke you fight try'n to make it right
loose control
there you go
putt'n on a show....

Lock'n down, standing ground, I'm gonna find my own sound....
I got my own Beet, stand on my two feet, an't gonna defeet my week...
Boom Boom....Boom Boom ..keep'n my own tune...

I'm tired, Confused
I know what I need to do
take control shame on you 
My friends treat me better than you  Yahhhh
My friends treat me better than you
Overwhelmed Gett'n Down, not gonna come around..

Lock'n down, Standing Ground, I'm gonna find my own sound...
whatchu U say, an't ok, cover my ass so I don't pay
Wont loose my mind, keep in time
I'll recover just fine...Yahhh

Pushed around, knocked down,  Overwhelmed
not gonna come around....No
Lock'n down, standing ground, I'm gonna find my own sound....
I got my own Beet, stand on my two feet, an't knowbody gonna defeet my week...Boom Boom....Vroom Vroom
Boom Boom Vroom Vroom...keep'n my own tune...

Overwhelmed Gett'n Down, not gonna come around..
Lock'n down, Standing Ground, I'm gonna find my own sound...
whatchu U say, an't ok, cover my ass so I don't pay
Wont loose my mind, keep in time
I'll recover just fine...Yahhh

 


Comments

Spartano wrote on 8/3/2011, 4:10 PM

Super Lady singing and music, unfortunately your bass drum Are Again Overrides of the volume,
Lady, Lady, Please Learn to work with the mastering, eighth on the peak meter that is all i Green area, Kind regards, your friend, Joachim!

Last changed by Spartano on 8/3/2011, 4:10 PM, changed a total of 1 times.

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Magellan21 wrote on 8/4/2011, 3:37 AM

hat mir gefallen! Gute Arbeit!Bass ist bissen übersteuert , Qualitätsverlust!::::::::...

smartsmurf wrote on 8/4/2011, 8:05 AM

Lyrics and song structure are great... unfortunately you just ignored mastering completely and this track is completely overmodulated...

Former user wrote on 8/4/2011, 4:27 PM

Very good song :           5********

Rana wrote on 8/5/2011, 2:59 AM

Hey Lori,

Great lyrics and structure... I somehow always feel the need towards the finer details in your tracks, i.e. mix and mastering is what probably differentiates a good track from an excellent one...

Cheers.

Rana.

Former user wrote on 8/6/2011, 5:19 AM

Ist das ne Nummer, wow. Haut mich fast vom Stuhl.

Mix wurde ja schon angesprochen. Aber trotzdem 5* und FAV

ArtistW wrote on 8/9/2011, 6:14 PM

I think you have great potential but somehow the mix does not contribute to that picture but still 5*

 

P.S. When everybody will only upload their music here and then will sit down (like you do; I have the impresson) and wait nothing will happen.

I mean this community will only proper work when the members will now and then  listen to the music of other members

LOOSER wrote on 8/12/2011, 10:22 PM

wow l ike u voice its rocking    great

Alix wrote on 11/9/2011, 4:26 PM

You have a good black voice in this song. Very cool

Alix