After about 10 Mixers maybe more and certain adjustments as per suggested I think this is a better listen. At times I have found it difficult to ascertain most adjustments as they are quite subtle. I hope the listener will find it more flowing and if not please feel free to point it out. I have learned a great deal with this track, and I believe I need more experience mostly with mixing because I think I may have a tin ear lol.
Respectfully, SEA-K....Chris