Beautiful dreams

archibald-lapre schreef op 17.12.2009 om 12:38 uur
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Beautiful dreams

 

This should be heaven this should be all

O my darling I want you call

No more sorrow nothing more at all

This should be heaven this should be all

 

Last night I suddenly hit

A site and I think o heavenly shit

What I see I do not   regret

Till I die I’ll never forget

Looking at this picture fall in stress

A heavenly lady   not in dress

 

This should be heaven this should be all

O my darling I want you call

No more sorrow nothing more at all

This should be heaven this should be all

 

Such a woman only God can make

I think the first woman on earth must be awake

She was not dirty showing

She was not also blowing

She was only showing what heaven makes

I have already seen so many shakes

 

This should be heaven this should be all

O my darling I want you call

No more sorrow nothing more at all

This should be heaven this should be all

 

But this one I have never seen her before

Such a woman to protect her from being a whore

I would lay everyday in front of her door

Fight against all given her pain and more

To be a shelter against sorrow and fall

Yes this should be heaven yes this should be all

 

This should be heaven this should be all

O my darling I want you call

No more sorrow nothing more at all

This should be heaven this should be all

 

From the first sight from the first

O my darling I have such a thirst

To make you happy and let you see… everything

So darling grab that golden ring

Let us love all the night and swing

Fly away with me on my golden wing

 

This should be heaven this should be all

O my darling I want you call

No more sorrow nothing more at all

This should be heaven this should be all

This should be heaven this should be all

 

 

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Archibald Lapré

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Reacties

Voormalige gebruiker schreef op 17.12.2009 om 13:29 uur
Hm hm hm,....
at first,... your voice is not bad for singing, but you must train your singing. When you sung, the music get to the background. That dosen't fits really. The songstructure is not optimal and the song is a little bit too long.

And please, take a normal fontsize and color for the statement and lyrics. We are not blind!

All together, you go train your singing and i'll train my english ^^



Ps.: keep on, it worth.
archibald-lapre schreef op 17.12.2009 om 18:13 uur
Dear Friend,

Thanks for your reaction... and comments..and advise!

The songs I write are from the heart..and need
a voice to express what is deep inside the soul...

Sometimes it is sounding raw, sometimes crying...
for(because) the feelings inside must go out...carrying the words
you know...

My voice reach is very long....from the deep till the highest... 

Friendly,

Always yours,

Archibald Lapré

P.S.: There are people who need it...and there are people who don't care!
All it's depending on the mood of the listner at the moment.  
Voormalige gebruiker schreef op 17.12.2009 om 19:40 uur

Deneu schreef op 17.12.2009 om 21:07 uur
Das ist ein Anfang...

deneu
Voormalige gebruiker schreef op 17.12.2009 om 22:45 uur
funny in a way...
MartinJr schreef op 18.12.2009 om 18:01 uur
Mir gefällt's sehr gut. Mal was Unverwechselbares mit Charakter.
Voormalige gebruiker schreef op 18.12.2009 om 22:17 uur
I like the way you done. Please take care on your mix

Cheers
siggi_s schreef op 18.12.2009 om 23:41 uur
Also ich finde,

Hut ab! Mut hast Du ja!

Aber noch ein bischen üben und dann wird es richtig Klasse!

Im Moment Unverwechselbar durch Dein Gesang!

Mach weiter! Wir können alle nur besser werden!

Von mir ehrliche **und einen für Deinen Mut*! Macht also ***!

G Siggi S.  

Sorry!