THOU HAST IT NOW VI

Clay-Brian-Wilson wrote on 6/9/2018, 3:32 PM
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Tags: Rock, Radio play, Pop

Folks, A toxic love song with the great John Duffin who is JohnZSmith here on this site. ENJOY. God bless, Clay

Thou Hast It Now

Lyric & Music/John Duffin &
Clay Wilson

 

Verse 1 – That Was Then

I once had
thou. Thou had me. I had thou.

That was
then but for us, this is now!

 

(Instrumental Verse)

 

Verse 2 – Broken Promises

I once had
thou. Thou had me. We made vows.

And broken promises
are all we have now.

 

(Instrumental Verse)

 

Bridge – Rather Dead than Alive

I said
something cruel I shouldn’t have said.

Thou said we
were through and that thou would rather

See me dead.
Than alive…

 

Verse 3 – The Story of Us

Thou brought
woes upon thee. Thou was crushed. Into dust.

And thus
that was the story of us.

 

(Instrumental Piano Verse)

 

Bridge – Rather Dead than Alive

I said
something cruel I shouldn’t have said.

Thou said we
were through and that thou would rather

See me dead
than alive.

 

(Instrumental Verse)

 

Verse 4 – Finale: The Hurt

I once had
thou. Thou had me. I had thou

And the
hurt?

Well, THOU
HAST IT NOW!

 

© 2016 John
Anthony Duffin & Clayton Brian Wilson

All Rights
Reserved

A heated little vitriolic ode to love stabbed out with a
sharp blade and a staccato rhythm. Of course

It is just an extrapolation of the passion of love lost.
But beware the passion is a force to be reckoned

With, and poison is a beverage best served chilled.

Genre: Toxic Love Song

John Anthony Duffin Adelaide 13/05/2016

 

Comments

horst-d wrote on 6/10/2018, 3:46 AM

good self made pop music😊👍❤️♪♪♪

I like it very much.

Have a nice Sunday

Horst😎

franco-galateo wrote on 6/10/2018, 7:08 AM

overall I would say good ..

franco

ITCHYPHOX wrote on 6/14/2018, 1:05 AM

Clay & Duffins delivering quality music goodness. This one's straight to the feel good factor thanks for the happy days. I love listening to you guys on my way home from the nightshift grind. Nice one fella's for making my way through the gray urban jungle so much more colourful 8)

Former user wrote on 7/10/2018, 3:20 PM

love the stringa and piano, and johns vox just comes to life in this joyous colab, man the sound quality is better at magix, got me tapping my feet, a great soing guys to just sit back and smile, loved it. 💯😊👍🌈

musicMD wrote on 8/10/2018, 2:20 PM

Very lush pop tune here fellows. Full of musical goodness and a treat to hear. Love the strings and the very British sound and feel to the music. Great music from you two.....

MitchSoul wrote on 9/10/2018, 12:54 PM

Lovely pop tune you got here. You really put some British into this tune,& more mid 1960's sound. Awesome👌

Clay-Brian-Wilson wrote on 1/24/2019, 6:11 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful reviews. God bless, Clay

fetter339 wrote on 2/6/2019, 7:57 PM

Clay + John = Hitsville. Excellent tune and recording.