Mal wieder rock II

masni wrote on 3/3/2010, 10:07 AM

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      Habe meine Melodie richtig ueberarbeitet ....
Die Kritiken und Vorschlaege habe ich ernst genommen ..
Bin neugierig, ob die rockige Melodie jetzt besser ankommt ..

Ho rielaborato   il mio rock precedente .. Credo che sia adesso meglio

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Guitorb wrote on 3/6/2010, 4:29 PM

That's a lot of guitar!

Gone69 wrote on 3/13/2010, 5:03 PM

Good track !

Guitarjams wrote on 3/20/2010, 11:49 PM

I think it's good! There is contrast between the more clean guitar lead sound, and the distorted guitar sound. So the cleaner sounds as though it is going in one direction then the more distorted sounds like it wants to go somewhere else.
Not that they are played incorrectly, the transition of tone from one to the other stands out a little.
Reminds me of a jam session years back where I had to play clean and the other player was rocking out. It's still good!

Spencer wrote on 4/27/2010, 4:06 PM

Hallo Carl, ich war lange nicht hier. Erst einmal freue ich mich sehr, dass Du wieder rock`st.
Was hier fehlt ist eine klare Linie. Ich kann keinen Songaufbau finden. Das Material und die Elemente welche Du eingebaut hast, reichen für 3 Songs. Weniger ist manchmal mehr.