This is a hiphop acapella, 'Lose Yo Life' by The Alchemist Feat Snoop Dogg under some rock samples. I tried a few new ideas to get a different sound and structure. My speakers are still not working right and I get a different sound when listening through this website. I can hardly wait to find out how it really sounds...
The pan is not ok. The bass is to loud, so you can't hear what is rapping.
At the end a guitar or a keyboard is hiding in a box, it must be at the front.