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Farstom wrote on 6/8/2014, 1:58 PM

not bad

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

hrbrgr wrote on 6/9/2014, 1:34 AM

Hi Lucy,

ein schönes Bild. Genau so sieht es aus, in diesen Burger-Shops.

Eine kleine Hilfe gefällig (vielleicht für's nächste schöne Bild)?

Leider verlaufen die oberen Kanten der Sitzlehnen entgegengesetzt zum eigenlichen Fluchtpunkt.

Hier siehst Du was ich meine:

Mach weiter mit soviel Fantasie.

Gruß Harald