Whoa, dude. Best thing here is the cover - and I even can't stand watching that outstanding cover if this means I'd have to listen to the song. The song itself is not bad, there are some nice ideas in it.
But: The song is totally distorted and overmodulated, a total mess. In addition, you have three or four different breaks in it....but not one of them has a lot to do with the song or brings up any certain, cool hooking part.
Thanks for the comments. I didn't notice it being overmodulated and distorted. Maybe I need to clean my ears . If you guys wanna check out my other stuff you can go to myspace.com/utnapishtim78 and myspace.com/fxgrand. Please add me as a friend if you guys have any myspace sites.