The relations between your guitare and vocal my be a little bit better in same volume. Evenso on the vocal for my ears is to much reverb. Thats my mind. But you have a good voice and I´m shure you can make it better.
LG hans Josef
Former user
wrote on 3/6/2009, 5:02 PM
Salut mon Ami ....
Oui, c'est un grand plaisir de te retrouver ici .... avec ta musique simple, et tes paroles de poëte bien de chez nous ....
Ecoute la chanson tout juste après la tienne, toi qui veux me faire composer pour des elfes .... .... dit moi ce que tu en penses.
I think you are making it too easy for yourself. I did like you song - un été de Bretagne- - very much and your voice is still good but you can do better. (It sounds to me like a first draft.)
well, the sound is really not the best and could certainly be improved...!!!
The song itself is nice, although I don`t understand the language. But I think it`s all about love, and that`s always good...!!!
Former user
wrote on 3/7/2009, 11:06 AM
salut Zen
aujourd´hui, tu as certaines fautes. de ta voix sonne de manière surmodulée " P " vient trop dur, tu as oublié microfon la protection, ou tu étail trop à cela.