Comments

ZIGGI wrote on 10/20/2008, 1:24 PM
Hi Edviges,

Another very nice song with a good blend of genres.
I did find my foot tapping to the beat.

A small tip...keep an eye on your sound levels. One of two of the bass sounds come close to saturating/overloading the overall sound. (only my humble opinion)

But otherwise very enjoyable, good structure and variety.

Keep going
Best Regards
Brian
Guitorb wrote on 10/20/2008, 3:27 PM
 Ziggy's right. A great song. Well arranged and,I must say,it suits you well. Just needs mixed again. Some people try and listen to a mixdown on as many different speakers and headphones that they can get access to. In this way certain anomallies may be revealed that would not be with only one type of monitor. But if you're like me(Dream Flying as an example)you want to get it out and move on.
 The rap was a good idea,I like that.
falling_starz wrote on 10/20/2008, 3:40 PM
I would like to thank both Guitorb and Brian for your attention and tips and i also agree with you. I know that it's not perfect, this problem has to do with some other problems also in other songs that i've informed you and it's not relationed with the level of the sounds. When i hear this song in wav format (the original one), there are no problems and i only hear interferences, when i hear it in mp3 format. I already put it in 320 (higher quality), but it's worthless.
A_Williams wrote on 10/20/2008, 8:53 PM
Cool groove. The rap fits nicely. I get those artifacts in my recordings as well. I have had to start breaking up my samples into small 8 bar bits to keep my songs noise free, and actually in sync\timed correctly. Takes forever though . Good ideas here!
6-21-3-11 wrote on 10/21/2008, 9:51 AM
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Sect.23 wrote on 10/22/2008, 11:57 PM
Yes! Come to think of it, A. Williams is absolutely right. I've found that the longer a clip is, it distorts for some reason, I've also had to chop up long samples to get them to sound properly.
On another note, great song, with a feeling of 'fun in the sun'! I had all fingers moving and my feet tapping!
Cheers,
JayC